As a game, it fails. The controls are impossible! I used to think the first Cooking Mama game had bad sensitivity. I think you need to make a wider range of "touch". For example: When you have to trace the line to stir things; you have to trace it exactly and the window for error is too small.
I won't say anything else about it because I'll just start bashing.
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